{"id":613,"date":"2016-12-04T09:55:04","date_gmt":"2016-12-04T14:55:04","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/portfolios.cs.earlham.edu\/?p=613"},"modified":"2025-04-24T15:29:16","modified_gmt":"2025-04-24T19:29:16","slug":"paper-update","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/portfolios.cs.earlham.edu\/index.php\/2016\/12\/04\/paper-update\/","title":{"rendered":"Paper Update"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>The paper was my project for the weekend. I had intended it to be the final version, in order to be done with it entirely before exams and other projects came due, but I will instead consider this version the second draft and submit it to that slot on Moodle.<\/p>\n<p>More specific status of the paper:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>6 pages, including references and charts<\/li>\n<li>Wording is still shabby. I&#8217;ve emphasized completing the page count and choosing the correct scope, and therefore left wording and flow problems to the final draft.<\/li>\n<li>I updated the flow diagram to include arrows and better logical grouping of objects and information.<\/li>\n<li>I incorporated examples of interface design from Apple and Nextdoor.<\/li>\n<li>I expanded the description of the software, its current state, and what it could become in the future.<\/li>\n<li>I expanded the section on the social significance of HCI and behavior changes.<\/li>\n<li>In the final version I will also revise the abstract, move sections around, and remove the cruft. The revision is the time to subtract, not add.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>It&#8217;s a good second draft. It would be a bad final draft.<\/p>\n<p>This week I will accomplish three things:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li>Complete the final draft no later than Sunday night.<\/li>\n<li>Complete the basic software and clean up its git repository.<\/li>\n<li>Create the poster, lifting much of the content from the paper and building on a library template.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Looking forward to others&#8217; presentations on Wednesday.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>The paper was my project for the weekend. 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