{"id":617,"date":"2016-12-04T19:15:37","date_gmt":"2016-12-05T00:15:37","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/portfolios.cs.earlham.edu\/?p=617"},"modified":"2025-04-24T15:29:16","modified_gmt":"2025-04-24T19:29:16","slug":"second-draft-complete","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/portfolios.cs.earlham.edu\/index.php\/2016\/12\/04\/second-draft-complete\/","title":{"rendered":"Second Draft Complete"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Wanted to update to make that clear.<\/p>\n<p>I hope that my only requirements in the final version relate to style and language: adding the appropriate academic structure, rephrasing sentences and paragraphs, maybe moving something here or there.<\/p>\n<p>I hope not to need additional content, though it&#8217;s possible that some section will need an extra paragraph or two.<\/p>\n<p>It&#8217;s certainly enough for the poster.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Wanted to update to make that clear. 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